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T. Savage's avatar

You warmed up and hit back solid. Did way better than I could do. One recommendation, convert military speak into analogies so more people understand. You’d be surprised how people not in the military go blurry eyed on acronyms. Growing up for me, it was all do you want pbj on wb at 1300 for chow so I speak the language but many don’t. Getting too technical is easy for SME people. I’m a scientist, I’ve been told to speak English by educated people. You did well but if your going for a broader civi audience you need to dumb it down.

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Ryan Bauer's avatar

Good job, but get yourself some dress shoes. Bought a year sub last night.

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